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You know how fat girls run right?

You were doing that. "Running" to the girls bathroom. With bullies chasing you, they weren't running, they were there playing rock,paper and scissors debating who will chase after you.

Sadly you were no match for them, since your body weight were dragging you with the "trip".

Eventually, they caught up and cornered you. Kicking you in your stomach, punching you on your face and shouting some several harsh harass at you. As soon as they left the bell rang. You managed to get up on your feet, dusting yourself a little heading to your class.

Twisting the door knob open you were late as always. You stood there receiving some weird stares by your unknown classmates and some high-pitched laughs by the sluts, the teacher looked at you pitifully excusing you.

You didn't even bother to take your books out, you just laid your head on your folded hands and drifted off to slumber. The teachers class was over, (Fav Teacher) woke you up, then walking you to sending you to the nurse office.
As (Fav Teacher) escorted you to the nurse office, some of the sluts gave some shouts as if "Faking Innocent" or "Fat Ass", either it was a harass about you being fat or about your teacher escorting you. You ignored their shouts, sometimes feeling as if something or someone was following you.

You snorted to yourself as if someone was following you. Arriving at the nurse office, you saw the two bullies. One getting their nose fixed, was bruised badly; the other had black eyes on both sides, legs were almost crushed.

When they both see you there, they pleaded for forgiveness. You were confused, why would they do that? They were your bullies, never once bullies pleaded for forgiveness. Or at least in dramas.

It was end of school, people was bidding goodbye to each other, while you walk on the hallway heading home, some people gave some weird stares at you, then whimpered like a dog. What the hell? You ignored them

-Time skip-
There was a shadow or a person following you. But when you turn back there was nothing, just a pile of snow on the ground. Weird…

You opened the door, being greeted by silence, you lived alone due to your parents death.

Stomach grumbled loudly, pleading for food. You poked your tummy whispering “Bad tummy” as if it were real,then went to the shower in a hurry. Someone or somethings heart was aching when they saw this.
Part two --> [link]

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sonichetaliafan97 Feb 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
bullies got owned! haha!
Hey I am ust saying here but you should really fix those links.
Ya! Now other readers can use the link. And I also forgot to telll you that this is a great story!!!hgbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sorry about that last part. I lost my mouse on my laptop so i have to use the "red button" It is like the "just in case" mouse.
EternalRavenDreamer Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The link for part 2 keeps saying "Error 404, page not found"
Try browsing my gallery if it can help.
EternalRavenDreamer Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I found it, and it was so cute! > w <
:iconcannotevenplz: OH MY GOSSSSH!!! I TOTALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! This is probably the first Chunky reader insert I've seen besides the ones I write! OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!! :iconglompplz:
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