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You know how fat girls run right?

You were doing that. "Running" to the girls bathroom. With bullies chasing you, they weren't running, they were there playing rock,paper and scissors debating who will chase after you.

Sadly you were no match for them, since your body weight were dragging you with the "trip".

Eventually, they caught up and cornered you. Kicking you in your stomach, punching you on your face and shouting some several harsh harass at you. As soon as they left the bell rang. You managed to get up on your feet, dusting yourself a little heading to your class.

Twisting the door knob open you were late as always. You stood there receiving some weird stares by your unknown classmates and some high-pitched laughs by the sluts, the teacher looked at you pitifully excusing you.

You didn't even bother to take your books out, you just laid your head on your folded hands and drifted off to slumber. The teachers class was over, (Fav Teacher) woke you up, then walking you to sending you to the nurse office.
As (Fav Teacher) escorted you to the nurse office, some of the sluts gave some shouts as if "Faking Innocent" or "Fat Ass", either it was a harass about you being fat or about your teacher escorting you. You ignored their shouts, sometimes feeling as if something or someone was following you.

You snorted to yourself as if someone was following you. Arriving at the nurse office, you saw the two bullies. One getting their nose fixed, was bruised badly; the other had black eyes on both sides, legs were almost crushed.

When they both see you there, they pleaded for forgiveness. You were confused, why would they do that? They were your bullies, never once bullies pleaded for forgiveness. Or at least in dramas.

It was end of school, people was bidding goodbye to each other, while you walk on the hallway heading home, some people gave some weird stares at you, then whimpered like a dog. What the hell? You ignored them

-Time skip-
There was a shadow or a person following you. But when you turn back there was nothing, just a pile of snow on the ground. Weird…

You opened the door, being greeted by silence, you lived alone due to your parents death.

Stomach grumbled loudly, pleading for food. You poked your tummy whispering “Bad tummy” as if it were real,then went to the shower in a hurry. Someone or somethings heart was aching when they saw this.
Part two --> [link]

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AngelicOne19 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
I actually to poke my stomach and say "Bad tummy" when it hurts :P
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
bullies got owned! haha!
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sweetsassycat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
eheh do mess with the 2ps cute chubby girl
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
^^
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hellosaidcarly Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
:iconyaycanadaplz:
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Amity-the-ANIMElover Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student Artist
Hey I am ust saying here but you should really fix those links.
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XuanXAde Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
Fixed it ^^
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Amity-the-ANIMElover Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Artist
Ya! Now other readers can use the link. And I also forgot to telll you that this is a great story!!!hgbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Amity-the-ANIMElover Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Artist
Sorry about that last part. I lost my mouse on my laptop so i have to use the "red button" It is like the "just in case" mouse.
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EternalRavenDreamer Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The link for part 2 keeps saying "Error 404, page not found"
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XuanXAde Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Try browsing my gallery if it can help.
:3
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EternalRavenDreamer Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I found it, and it was so cute! > w <
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
:iconcannotevenplz: OH MY GOSSSSH!!! I TOTALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! This is probably the first Chunky reader insert I've seen besides the ones I write! OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!! :iconglompplz:
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HanaFa732 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A reader's insert that reaches out to the chubby people...I have got to read this!
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CuboneGirl21 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More please!
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MOAR PLZ!
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Puppiluvr Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
more yes? it was really good!!
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DeepSleepForTheTrees Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Continue~! o3o
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IzzyLuvsYou22 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you could would you continue this? This is awesome! :D
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Sabyy701 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CONTINUE PLEASE! :D
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Crystalessences Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
continue!!!
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goldenrainfalling Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Continue please!
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horsiefanatic Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
please continue
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
CONTINUE I LOVE 2P CANADA <3
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MonOnRawr Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Continue this please I must read more~
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KuroSama2 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue this, i would like to see what happens next ^^
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OoDisturbedNerdoO Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really should continue this, its great.
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KatsuYamamoto Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconmoarplz:
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Briarfox13 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More please, it's good =)
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SpiritStien111 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
You need yo write more!!!!!!!!!
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InsanelySweet Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
I'd liked to see what happens next. It's interesting.
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CountrygalxHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You definitely need to continue!!! This is soooo good!!!!!!
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VampirePat Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
please continue, it has a really good start
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sprinkybagels Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
So awesome!
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BlueWoundedWolf Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
moooree please
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue!
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kalliat Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
CONTINUEEEEEEEE
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Found you. :iconheplz:
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kalliat Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhesheplz:

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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconjumpheplz:
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kalliat Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ffffffff-
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YuRiMiKkI Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Artist
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE I CANNOT TAKE THE SUSPENSE.
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DeidarasCryingAngel Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
please do write more!
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please more! I really want to read more! :D
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nice cliff hanger :) . But i dont understand why the parents must be dead in ChubbyReader inserts.Please continue though, I'd like to read more!
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ReikaInnocentKiller Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Q.Q Continue please!
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ArtisticallyLiterate Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Please continue!
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deathnote10 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! Please
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agatstone Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
It sems interesting please continue.
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zutarafan4evea Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
please do. did you understand the note i sent you. if not then send me one back and we can discuss it.
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