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Waking up with the sun light shining directly at your fully closed eyes, you woke up. You moved your boyfriends arm that was currently on your not so slim waist softly so that you didn’t wake him up. You cleaned yourself at the bathroom hearing a groan, you knew that your boyfriend was awake.

“Morning Frau ..” He said while rubbing his eyes sleepily while his pet bird that was quite fond of you comparing to other girls chirped happily .
You always made your German boyfriends favourite food, wurst and beer. It wasn’t very healthy for him to drink beer in the morning but he always gave you those puppy eyes that you couldn’t resist, yet you were the only one he did it to.
You thought about little things about your relationship mostly happy but yet there was a thing that made you very sad. Both of your sizes, you were two times heavier than him yet he chose you, were he using you for making breakfast , lunch and dinner for him or did he wanted to embarrass you ?You shook your head trying not to think so much but yet it failed ,smelling something burning you quickly realized that you weren’t paying attention cooking. Luckily the food wasn’t awfully burned ,it was still eatable. Setting the breakfast on the table your boyfriend came. He was enjoying his breakfast by his looks, although it was always the same thing over and over again. Just as you were going to skip breakfast a voiced beamed

“Frau aren’t you going to eat breakfast? “ Your boyfriend  asked you in that sexy German accent that everyone was envious that didn’t have it. You shook your head as reply to him but still holding the hunger. You were very aware of your body size. People teasing you wasn’t the first time. When Gilbird knew it he comforted you and offered to kick their asses but you rejected his kind offer. People might think you were using his power. You took some fresh new clothing to the bathroom and had a long shower to clear off your mind. Drying yourself you looked at the full mirror, there was you your tummy had fat rolls ,legs were humongous ,most of your body parts were bigger .You smiled sadly at the reflection and putted on your clothes.
Opening the bathroom doors there was Gilbird, standing there with a not so amused face.
“What took you so long frau?”

“I was taking a long shower ..getting things off my mind..”You replied
“Size problem again?”
“Yeah..”

He lifted his head and putted it on your shoulder and whispered into your ear ..
“Don’t listen to what they say , no matter what size you are, Ich liebe dich”

“I love you too..” With that both of you kissed..That was the only thing you needed to forget all the pain.
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~PurpleLuverForever Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty good... But... You know Gilbird is his yellow bird right? Prussia's human name is Gilbert.
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~Romanosvitalregions Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes someone else sees this mistake too :iconamericahappyspazzplz:
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:iconzutarafan4evea:
i like how it got straight to the point in on the problems, but i would to have liked to have seen more drama. sizing issues aren't just black and white. i have some stories similar to this if you'd like to get an idea. i'm not perfect at it, because there's always room for improvement.
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:iconxuanxade:
I'll try to make it more dramatic.I would be happy if you would like to teach me and give me some ideas..
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:iconaly2840:
So cute ! and very good writen , too ! ... but i kind of think that it's a bit too small , but that's not a problem at all !!! i really like it !!! :icongreatjobplz: ~ i like chubby!reader , because i can say that it's a good "description" for me ^^; ~
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:iconxuanxade:
Aww thanks ~ Ill try making my one shits longer ...
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:iconaly2840:
:hug: ffs , dont speak like that !
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~glaceon007 Feb 1, 2013  Student General Artist
This was cute~ I just love chubby!readerxHetalia
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:iconjapankikukitty:
This was cute, I liked it! I can also relate cuz I have issues with my size as well....
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:iconxuanxade:
Thanks~ Aww *Hugs*
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